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09-06-2007 11:47 PMEdger is offline Send an Email to Edger Search for Posts by Edger Post Reply with Quote Edit/Delete Post       Go to the top of this page

For length of pause, yeah.


... > . > ,

I'm not sure where : or ; fit, though.

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09-07-2007 6:52 AMMav is offline Send an Email to Mav Homepage of Mav Search for Posts by Mav Post Reply with Quote Edit/Delete Post       Go to the top of this page

... > . > , > ; > :

Generally. Semicolon and comma could be switched around.

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Quote by Hol:
Though it's Christmas Day
I really do have to say
Dammit Mav, you're Gay

Quote by Alizarin:
<Alizarin>: mav mav he's mabulous la la la




Quote by Daveh:
I thought of you and my cock got as hard as a diamond, the rope stood no chance D:

09-13-2007 3:55 PMMav is offline Send an Email to Mav Homepage of Mav Search for Posts by Mav Post Reply with Quote Edit/Delete Post       Go to the top of this page

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9.13.07
this has never happened to me
before.
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i've met girls oh  i've met girls.
i've met girls and i've met 'em in every which way, every angle
and my geometry was perfect  remindin' of Newton in its revelations.

i've met girls of every sort and i have been to nirvana in my own time--
it's a nice place in a small corner, the grass the color of honeysuckle and
the sidewalk  made of loving carvings of  from everyone making their mark
with knives made of heart-bone and stone

my mark was made with the bone of a girl who opened up her cage willingly

our lips met and it was revelation  i didn't steal her breath she stole mine
stole mine and then  a god  she gave it back.  my lungs
filled with the both of us  a white noise  buddhist silence  she knew
how to turn me off.
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he,a lone ina full place
close to earth but the signs  still   hit him  in  the face
messages   to/from  anyone  not him
and he is waiting,   born foreign/
             /but feeling a  native/
                          /with  all his  fingers/
/every  cork  popping  in the air
every  crash  an  applause
she wants he to be  a standing  ovation
crescendo  curtain  call
but steps/begin/inan order
and his appear/
/ as  missed.
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       many days i wish i was a wolf
   perhaps then i would not shed
                  so much   of  my self
skin and  hair  and   hate
                  (like  a dog )
                          perhaps then i'd have a sense
                      of my place
( though  i admit  i would not want to be
            an omega)
                 Perhaps then the rhinestones
        i  use to encrust
                        my experience
     would be  as worthless
                    as they need to be
and  perhaps  then
          were   i  lost  in the snow
       i  would know
                     that i could climb up
             to the top
                         and       howl
and soon
         another wolf
                   would come running.
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i miss the tiny parts of my history
my life used to be button-crusted
here laid fourteen sobbing corpses
someday i'm sure i'll never marry

there's more to more to me than my two tongues
i know you can't have what you don't want but try
something about this tells me you're a bad liar
fucking up my sequence, are you? thank you so so
       so
                so
    so
          so
             s                              o
much for your word, huh?
i guess it just went splat
my face doesn't fly anymore
i guess i should feel worse

you're not making any sense i don't know what you're doing anymore
i want to fly fly fly fly fly but my shoulders just aren't strong enough
cats can cautiously de-capitate the most capricious considerate cocks
i bet you wish you didn't know these things, hell i feel the same exact
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too late for me to put the damn gun down
can't you see i need this shit, i need it, i--
i!i!i! can't take much more of your cloudy
misdemeanors don't mean anything to me

still this shit
is all sorta
nutty ain't
it? Well, I


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Quote by Hol:
Though it's Christmas Day
I really do have to say
Dammit Mav, you're Gay

Quote by Alizarin:
<Alizarin>: mav mav he's mabulous la la la




Quote by Daveh:
I thought of you and my cock got as hard as a diamond, the rope stood no chance D:

09-13-2007 4:10 PMD is offline Send an Email to D Search for Posts by D Post Reply with Quote Edit/Delete Post       Go to the top of this page

PROTIP: The Space Bar and Tab Button should be used in semiautomatic fashion.
piece.

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09-13-2007 4:11 PMDiglett is offline Send an Email to Diglett Search for Posts by Diglett Post Reply with Quote Edit/Delete Post       Go to the top of this page

What in the fuck is that.
09-13-2007 4:36 PMMav is offline Send an Email to Mav Homepage of Mav Search for Posts by Mav Post Reply with Quote Edit/Delete Post       Go to the top of this page

They're poems, assholes.

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Quote by Hol:
Though it's Christmas Day
I really do have to say
Dammit Mav, you're Gay

Quote by Alizarin:
<Alizarin>: mav mav he's mabulous la la la




Quote by Daveh:
I thought of you and my cock got as hard as a diamond, the rope stood no chance D:

09-13-2007 4:52 PMDiglett is offline Send an Email to Diglett Search for Posts by Diglett Post Reply with Quote Edit/Delete Post       Go to the top of this page

Your missing lines.
09-13-2007 5:12 PMStruggler is offline Send an Email to Struggler Search for Posts by Struggler Post Reply with Quote Edit/Delete Post       Go to the top of this page

Mav

is
t
r
y
ing

to be different
Dustin

How dare you deny his creativity

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Hol: It looks like a dreidel.
X: I've never eaten one of those.

09-13-2007 5:35 PMDiglett is offline Send an Email to Diglett Search for Posts by Diglett Post Reply with Quote Edit/Delete Post       Go to the top of this page

Oh, sorry.

Mav, your creativity is missing some lines.

(Notably Interest and Amusement, but nobody reads my shit either so whatcha gonna do)
09-13-2007 5:35 PMMav is offline Send an Email to Mav Homepage of Mav Search for Posts by Mav Post Reply with Quote Edit/Delete Post       Go to the top of this page

Quote:
Originally posted by Evil Ryu
Your missing lines.


The hellre you talking about, missing lines?

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Quote by Hol:
Though it's Christmas Day
I really do have to say
Dammit Mav, you're Gay

Quote by Alizarin:
<Alizarin>: mav mav he's mabulous la la la




Quote by Daveh:
I thought of you and my cock got as hard as a diamond, the rope stood no chance D:

09-13-2007 5:39 PMDiglett is offline Send an Email to Diglett Search for Posts by Diglett Post Reply with Quote Edit/Delete Post       Go to the top of this page

You have some lines there that have cut off words or no words at all.
09-13-2007 5:42 PMStruggler is offline Send an Email to Struggler Search for Posts by Struggler Post Reply with Quote Edit/Delete Post       Go to the top of this page

It's probably not supposed to.

IT'S DEEP MAN

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Hol: It looks like a dreidel.
X: I've never eaten one of those.

09-13-2007 5:43 PMDiglett is offline Send an Email to Diglett Search for Posts by Diglett Post Reply with Quote Edit/Delete Post       Go to the top of this page

Oh..

..Well that's stupid. Mad
09-13-2007 5:55 PMMav is offline Send an Email to Mav Homepage of Mav Search for Posts by Mav Post Reply with Quote Edit/Delete Post       Go to the top of this page

Quote:
Originally posted by Evil Ryu
You have some lines there that have cut off words or no words at all.



...I'm not sure why you'd expect every line to have something (you have to seperate stanzas somehow), and I'm fairly sure these poems don't have any situations where I split a word between the end of one line and the start of the next. o.o

So yeah still not sure what you're talking about.


Also Hol you can go fuck yourself.

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Quote by Hol:
Though it's Christmas Day
I really do have to say
Dammit Mav, you're Gay

Quote by Alizarin:
<Alizarin>: mav mav he's mabulous la la la




Quote by Daveh:
I thought of you and my cock got as hard as a diamond, the rope stood no chance D:

09-13-2007 6:06 PMStruggler is offline Send an Email to Struggler Search for Posts by Struggler Post Reply with Quote Edit/Delete Post       Go to the top of this page

Laughing Out Loud

I GUESS I WAS RIGHT!

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Hol: It looks like a dreidel.
X: I've never eaten one of those.

09-13-2007 6:37 PMDiglett is offline Send an Email to Diglett Search for Posts by Diglett Post Reply with Quote Edit/Delete Post       Go to the top of this page

Good call.

INTERNET HIGH FIVE!
09-13-2007 7:31 PMStruggler is offline Send an Email to Struggler Search for Posts by Struggler Post Reply with Quote Edit/Delete Post       Go to the top of this page

*high fives*

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Hol: It looks like a dreidel.
X: I've never eaten one of those.

04-19-2008 8:30 PMMav is offline Send an Email to Mav Homepage of Mav Search for Posts by Mav Post Reply with Quote Edit/Delete Post       Go to the top of this page

When the old mother finally gasped her last, all that remained were the last piles of dust and a perfect imprint upon her covering sheets. As she crumbled away down the road with death, she left us a gift in the form of a last image of her from perfect times, scratched scribbled sketched and sculpted on eternal linen, the smiling face of our silent watchful matriarch already fading away through its youthful replacement on the sheets of our minds.

The streets gasped and breathed slowly with the death, struggling not to become too overcome with the lost feeling of warmth and security, not minding the pattering of steps on asphalt and the bounces of energetic wheels speeding up, and in this way was our old mother given a companion down the road, to help her shoulder the burdens of crossroads to come, to satisfy those motherly urges she would likely never fully escape.

In the double-wake and the weeks to come, it was Kelson’s eyes that remained the clearest, their lined pure-grain waves of wood unstained by the waves of the flood that drenched the rest of us from summer heat and sorrow. We were bartering for some good, eternal varnish, but he remained behind our chattering backs and was more concerned with the state of her body and our memories. It was he who took the responsibility of tending to wet eyes and weighted nerves and caught throats and heavy hearts while the rest of us dealt with phones and plots and people and payments. It was he who patched the wet, sobbing holes in her home and packed away the parts of her that weren’t getting buried, who sat only half disinterested to monitor the patters of feet on black street, and it was he who, at the end of that hot August, took the linen imprinted with her lineless body and burned it down to ash.

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Quote by Hol:
Though it's Christmas Day
I really do have to say
Dammit Mav, you're Gay

Quote by Alizarin:
<Alizarin>: mav mav he's mabulous la la la




Quote by Daveh:
I thought of you and my cock got as hard as a diamond, the rope stood no chance D:

04-19-2008 8:31 PMMav is offline Send an Email to Mav Homepage of Mav Search for Posts by Mav Post Reply with Quote Edit/Delete Post       Go to the top of this page

I'm trying to get into writing prose again... not sure what to do with this, but I'm in the library and wanted to save it somewhere I could get at outside of said library.

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Quote by Hol:
Though it's Christmas Day
I really do have to say
Dammit Mav, you're Gay

Quote by Alizarin:
<Alizarin>: mav mav he's mabulous la la la




Quote by Daveh:
I thought of you and my cock got as hard as a diamond, the rope stood no chance D:

09-12-2008 9:50 PMStruggler is offline Send an Email to Struggler Search for Posts by Struggler Post Reply with Quote Edit/Delete Post       Go to the top of this page



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GUL DUKAT DID NOTHING WRONG.

Hol: It looks like a dreidel.
X: I've never eaten one of those.

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